Hey, fellas, need your help/advice to evaluate landing page design

Hello, there guys, me and friend are about to launch internet-shop, would be absolutely great if some of you could provide any feedback on lnading page we just finished. So its in russian language and you wont understand the text, but if you can just evaluate general design, colours, position of Call-To-Action buttons, general impression. The website is for anti-hair loss cosmetics.

First version here – http://imgur.com/a/egZWb

Second version here – http://imgur.com/a/y2Ulp

Our main concern is that very first front page is grey background with black letters wont really work, not sure how to go about it.

Highly appreacite your time and thanks in advance!

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